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"The Roman Empire During the Time of Its Decline", by Bulat Okudjava

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A 1987 concert in Germany.

Lyrics and translation:

Римская империя времени упадка
сохраняла видимость твердого порядка:
Цезарь был на месте, соратники рядом,
жизнь была прекрасна, судя по докладам.
А критики скажут, что слово "соратник" - не римская деталь,
что эта ошибка всю песенку смысла лишает...
Может быть, может быть, может и не римская - не жаль,
мне это совсем не мешает, а даже меня возвышает.

The Roman Empire during the time of its decline
Preserved the appearance of firm order:
The caesar was in his place, his comrades near him,
And life was wonderful, according to reports.
But the critics will say that the word "comrades" is not a Roman detail,
That this mistake deprives this entire little song of its meaning...
Maybe, maybe, maybe it's not Roman--I'm not sorry about it,
It doesn't interfere with what I have in mind; on the contrary, it elevates me.

Римляне империи времени упадка
ели что придется, напивались гадко,
а с похмелья каждый на рассол был падок -
видимо, не знали, что у них упадок.
А критики скажут, что слово "рассол", мол, не римская деталь,
что эта ошибка всю песенку смысла лишает...
Может быть, может быть, может и не римская - не жаль,
мне это совсем не мешает, а даже меня возвышает.

The Romans of the empire during the time of its decline
Ate anything at all, got stinking drunk,
And each one of them liked to drink pickle juice when hungover--
They must not have known that it was the time of their decline.
But the critics will say that "pickle juice", y'know, that's not a Roman detail,
That this mistake deprives this entire little long of its meaning...
Maybe, maybe, maybe it's not Roman--I'm not sorry about it,
It doesn't interfere with what I have in mind; on the contrary, it elevates me.

Юношам империи времени упадка
снились постоянно то скатка, то схватка:
то они - в атаке, то они - в окопе,
то вдруг - на Памире, а то вдруг - в Европе.
А критики скажут, что "скатка", представьте, не римская деталь,
что эта ошибка, представьте, всю песенку смысла лишает...
Может быть, может быть, может и не римская - не жаль,
мне это совсем не мешает, а даже меня возвышает.

The young men of the empire during the time of its decline
Constantly dreamed either of bedrolls or of fights,
Now they're on the attack, now they're in the trench,
Now suddenly they're on Pamir, now suddenly--in Europe.
But the critics will say that "bedroll" is, imagine that! not a Roman detail,
That this mistake deprives this entire little long of its meaning...
Maybe, maybe, maybe it's not Roman--I'm not sorry about it,
It doesn't interfere with what I have in mind; on the contrary, it elevates me.

Римлянкам империи времени упадка,
только им, красавицам, доставалось сладко -
все пути открыты перед ихним взором:
хочешь - на работу, а хочешь - на форум.
А критики хором: "Ах, "форум", ах, "форум" - вот римская деталь!
Одно лишь словечко - а песенку как украшает!
Может быть, может быть, может и римская - а жаль...
Мне это немного мешает и замысел мой разрушает.

The Roman women of the empire during the time of its decline,
Only they, the beauties, had it sweet--
All the roads were open to their gaze--
If you want to, you can go to work, and if you want to, to the forum.
And all the critics, in unison, say, "Oh, forum, oh, forum--now here's a Roman detail!
Just one little word--but how it embellishes this little song!"
Maybe, maybe, maybe it's a Roman detail--but I find it a pity...
It interferes with what I have in mind, a little, and it destroys my plot.

Comments

amaebi: black fox (Default)
Sep. 26th, 2024 09:39 am (UTC)
Thanks!
med_cat: (Default)
Sep. 28th, 2024 02:11 am (UTC)
My pleasure :)
hhimring: Estel, inscription by D. Salo (Default)
Sep. 28th, 2024 10:28 am (UTC)
Thank you for sharing!
med_cat: (Default)
Sep. 28th, 2024 10:31 am (UTC)
My pleasure :)